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Turtle Walk 2

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Relax man.

No action, no plot, just relaxin.

Don't worry nothing jumps out at you half way through, Turtle walk is just relaxing.

(Satellite - Dave Mathews Band)

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Good

Very nice graphics and style.

Different views

You should animate different perspectives of the turtle, like have some ariel shots or maybe one from the little mouse(?) on his back looking over his head. It would really keep the viewers attention more than just the side angle shot. You've made it clear that you don't want to have a plot so you'll have to supplment that lack of story with dynamic animating. Your style is nice but it would be even better to see if from different angels.

Kinda like the Yuyu

Well drawn but boring. It would be nice if you made it have more of a point to it, instead of just watching a turtle do whatever it was doing. Maybe add a story to it.

KraakenHex responds:

I get yer meaning, but that's not the point of the series.

I kinda liked it!

At first I thought "Okay, this is going to be boring -_-'.. "
But after a while I saw the background changing and I saw a lot of new stuff.
I really enjoyed it. I loved the music that you've used too ^^
You should make a series out of this.
A turtle with a mouse on his back on a journey, meeting new people and discovering things. The mouse and the turtle are very different from each other (the mouse is fast, the turtle isn't. The turtle is kinda big, the mouse isn't at all). But they don't care about their differences, they are just good friends on a journey. You don't HAVE to make series, but if you would I would really watch it!
Good job!
8/10

KraakenHex responds:

Yeah it's a cool premise, but the point of the series is not to have a plot line. It'll be more obvious with further installments.

I liked you film.

Hello,

I liked your film, although I don't belive the animation portion of it took alot of skill. I understand it was just meant to be "relaxing", but you could have done some clouds, or a sparkling ocean.

That said you have truly fantastic drawings,
I look forward to seeing an actual animation piece from you in the future.

Nice choice in music as well.

Thanks,
- Celx S.

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May 25, 2008
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