hmm...not bad!
I thought it was pretty good for a first submission. Add some sound and music, and maybe make the text a little brighter, and it'll be really good! :)
Author Comments
Hi everyone,
this is my first submission. I just started with flash. As I realized animating this one that my skills are pretty bad, I focused on the story. But that seemed not as easy as I thought, too.
Maybe one could give me a little hint what I should make better in future?!
Thanks for watching,
Kerm
Good Start
On next put sound and music, is best, if hav sound i put 8, but on grafics only 6.
That's pretty good!
I like how it's creative. The only thing might've wanted to do would be to use a bigger size background. But, I really shoudn't be saying anything, cause I'm even worse.
Own style
it has it's own unique style and i like it!
Next time maybe make it a bit longer and stop the animation from shaking,that was pretty annoying
actualy i found the animation awesome
the animation was very good, i think you have some talent with it! its a pass by me!