Well, the graphics aren't good enough to be of my like and the animation isn't very good, maybe next time you can add voices to the characters to be better.
Agree, graphics, animation, no voices - that are minuses , but I did this a year ago and now I am trying to do my best, you'll see it in coming weeks)
IT WAS GOOD
I really had no idea what was going on and there was no sound but the out of place music. Though keep working on your flash skill and you might go on to make great flash.
The plot was alright, but the animation hurt my eyes. I hate this, sorry.