Better animation comes with time and practice. For your first flash it is not too bad. I kinda feel like you were excited to upload this when you could have made it longer. The horse actually didn't look too bad. Though there were parts where the under lying frame of the horses body and the layer with his legs don't sync fully. There are gaps and u can see parts of the background. Sound effects would not hurt this either. BUT it was not bad, i liked the song i am curious of where this is going. Good first film buddy!
Too long of an intro, and after the intro was not interesting at all. I suggest trying to grab the watcher's attention before boring them, It's what earns people 0's ;)
well, this WAS my first flash, good points though. I'm much better now :D
i agree with hysellmoot,
you have great ideas but
you need lots of work on
the concept is great,
only thing i didn't like was
it was a little short,
and the animation could
have been much better
The animation is great, I loved how the shadow cast upon the door as the knight knocked on it, well done. The tears could have been a bit slower and the horse was a little chopped up. The trotting animation was enjoyable however and I think you did a great, great job!
I actually really want to see the next part, the story captured my attention.
Please PM when the next one is out!
The animation needs a lot of work but i really liked how the story begins and the music title of the song please?