uhmm..well I havent submitted stuff here for years ...so I'm doing it again to see hows newgrounds now days...this is some animated version I did of my graphic novel ...hope you dig it
Well...
Ok so i didn't actually watch the whole video...but I just thought you should know that im pretty sure the actual translation of that marx quote is 'religion is the opiate of the masses'. And "opioum" is spelled opium anyway. and did you want the title to be "will" of god? im only rating it this highly cause it looks like a lot of hard work into it, so it would be silly to waste it with these silly errors.
thnx for noting those little mistakes :)
Amazing work. Devote your time on more of this...
I've always been fascinated with the prophetic works in Revelations and your opening scene really caught my attention. The persecution of Jewish, Muslim, and the non-Catholic people was a wonderful way to emphasize the gravity of the plot. In the end times, I hope we don't see things like this unfold, but I do believe that your representation really reflects a sobering truth. As far as the plot goes, I am utterly amazed and I would love to see this fleshed out into a full story.
Your animation was also very high caliber. It really shows that you took time to pay attention to detail. It is going to be very interesting to see where you take this.
My only criticism would be the audio quality. Perhaps it's just me, but the audio capture seemed to do no justice to the voices. Perhaps a change of microphone for the voice acting? Even if nothing is changed audio-wise, it wouldn't take away from this submission. You've done a wonderful wonderful job and I can't wait to see more.
5/5 on the vote. Please don't make us wait too long for the next installment.
Thanks a lot for your kind words :)
Cool
Well this got me pretty interested in the story, so I was wondering if there is somewhere I could learn more about your graphic novel?
if you are still interested you can check my blog http://cristianortiz-crom.blogspot.co m/
just my opinion..
well this left me a little confused but ansious of what next but u should make before anything a movie that explain the begining of the story or something that put you in the storyline just an opinion... and u should improve ur graphics just work hard on it ; )...
hope u submit a second part soon...
by the way sorry for ortographic errors i am latinoamerican and i am still learning english xD
thanks!! your english is just fine mate..Im from a southamerican background myself :)
well...
The message your trying to give is clear so good story line.The animation was smooth i love the blue effect sounds were clear . I don't like the subject but i cant grad you on that.so 9/10 and seeing the pope dieing might be a little offensive but well done on the animation.
thanks a lot man!