A big wow for the art.
Though the story does not quite touch me as it may others, the artwork was simply amazing. So smoothly drawn and with such high detail. That alone makes the video with watching.
gives me the feeling of getting through it. thats something everyone can learn about. Good work mate :)
The visuals are great.
But thats about it, i mean the story is very weak and the only thing that kept me from switching this off half way through watching it where the graphics which where quality, i mean VERY GOOD QUALITY !
Just a tip, if you are trying to say something do not dumb it down otherwise you will get what happend in this flash, the message dident get across nicely, i suggest redubbing this version as the voice actors where very cheesy, haha sorry guys and gals.
I don't quite get it.
Was it just some form of lesson or something?
I like the way you get over the accident by cracking the image. It's good cause we know what happen even if you didn't take hours to draw and animate it.
But, it's only my thougt, maybe you could gain some punch if you don't make the last scene with the girl having her hair cut. The end could be really nice with her going on the road with the pick-up guy, and we understand she's going to a new life, on a new departure. Making us viewing her getting her hair cut make me think it will be more scenes after it.
That was my commentary, trying to help, but still my own view.
(Sorry for the bad english, I'm not ^^; )
just watch the original ending