Nice work

I think that there are a few areas where you could improve, but overall, you've produced a good flash with a decently worked out plot and reasonable animation.

I think that when you draw the characters and you do the outlines of the characters, I wouldn't put it around the shoulders, as the outline looks as if it should go over the shoulder towards the neck, rather than around a U-turn towards the wrist again.

The guy that ran for cover ran far too slowly - you may as well have animated a dive, it would have been more simple and effective.

I'm still looking forward to the conclusion though :)

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Not bad.

A few improvements on the animation and it can be a masterpiece.

Funny

Although the humour seemed a bit dry i enjoyed it, it kind of grew on me :D. a bit more animation and itd be great. i personally rip on css because of peoples gameplay methods and that was just great for that.

Liked the introduction for everyone and the continued bit, i will look out for the next 1, cheers

nice try

i play C.S. and i didnt find that funny but at least u make a pretty long flash unlike other ppl

Actually fairly entertaining

One thing though, the sound was off by about a half second. Not a BIG deal... just a bit annoying.