Well, this is my second submission. I've had this Idea for a while and I still need alot practise drawing with the mouse but what the hell.
This flash is about a hardcore gamer who gets brought back to reality by someone who has a life.
its ok...
wow.. this flash has some really stuffed up stuff in it..
1. the time between each line is just way too long...
2.some of the lines don't match the mouth movement
3.1 line was said too early
But the story is good.. ill have to give you that.so just work on all the timing and stuff and it will be great!
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good idea, but it took forever to get to the punch line. on top of that, the voice of the n00b was hard to hear. also, try to improve you animation.
not bad
One thing that really killed this for me was the pacing... it seemed to just kinda drag on. I think this would have been much better if the punchline was delivered sooner and the overall animation much shorter.
WTF?
Ok that was just... I dont know it was far too random.
too true...
lol thats true, all those people who are really good at games are probably nerds who stay up all night playing that game. nicely done!