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Lyson's Life- Ep.01

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Hey! I'm starting a new series called Lyson's Life. I'm a bored kid and I'd like some honest feedback. Please note that I'm not that great at flash and any types would be great. Let's get this series off the ground!

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Put more into it

i just think you need to work harder and longer on each movie to prepare it for others to see. I like your ideas, but you need to animate them better. Things need to be drawn cleaner, voice acting needs to sound better, etc. you've got a good start, you just need to improve.