Hey! I'm starting a new series called Lyson's Life. I'm a bored kid and I'd like some honest feedback. Please note that I'm not that great at flash and any types would be great. Let's get this series off the ground!
Put more into it
i just think you need to work harder and longer on each movie to prepare it for others to see. I like your ideas, but you need to animate them better. Things need to be drawn cleaner, voice acting needs to sound better, etc. you've got a good start, you just need to improve.
"Great."
I'm giving this a 10 for many reasons. But the two that actually worth a rats ass is the fact its hilarious, and that its original. Great work ev, keep it up!
man!
That fly was hilariously large! was that by accident or design?!
Design haha. Flies are hilarious when they are large.
Practice and improvement, that's what it need.
Well, everything needs improvement, your walk cycles, your backgrounds, your characters, the audio... nothing practice and study other animations as well can't solve. Just decide what you're more interested now, for example, perspective, or maybe ways to tell story not always "with the camera on the front" like it was a theater, by the way, don't get too upset about it, I'm almost sure that most animators begin making everything very flat, by now I recommend you try to repeat the scene of any movie or animation you like, it may give you some ideas beyond practice, really. You could even adapt some sitcom episode to your series, who knows?
Thank you for your comments. I'm interested in how to improve and comments like these help out a lot. Thanks for watching.
longer, stronger.
So, the style is alright. The length though, leaves more wanted. In other words, lengthen it.
also, the sync of the sound and the characters was off at times.