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well, im going to be honest with you...yeah....you suck at the language XD BUT!! there are things you said very well, I can't tell you a lot about gramatical mistakes because I suck at english language...woot! xD lol but really, it was a nice work. The part of Alucard and Victoria I only understood "Nunca" . The voice of kat is cute :3
good!! well, ..you got 10/10 and 5/5. I like it.