interesting
smooth animation
Author Comments
This is my 1st real attempt at a Flash project. It took me around 5 hours to complete. The story is about a little bird that goes for a short walk and gets very very lost.
Short and sweet
3/5
7/10
The music set the tone nicely the animations were not that bad but the dialogs need a lot of work. Keep up the efforts and I think you have the creativity. What song was it and how plays it?
for a first crack at flash. its not bad
i mean i dont want to get technical about why it doesn't "deserve" 5's cuz there are a bunch of things on here that you'll just have to learn as you keep working on more projects. i feel the audience has to be responsible for the artist/flashanimator's improvement as well so i'll be as much help as i can.
first off, the plot is kind of lacking. 5hours is a really short time to come up with a project so maybe giving it more time and thought would help.
the animation is quite smooth actually but try and challenge yourself to put in more detail. The more detail you want of it, you're gonna have to put in more time into it. (obvious i know, but i just wanted to point that out)
the songchoice here was good. i personally love the song and the leisure like "traveling to strange place" theme worked with the lyrics and song
so thats something i cant criticize...
overall its alright. actually let me rephrase that, you're on a great start.
i hope this wont be your last entry. keep at it man it looks promising!
tiddminnnnn
nice
Good job. I can't say I cared for this much, but it wasn't terrible. I liked the style of your art. By the way, end the movie at some point or at least fade the screen to black at the end. It took me a while to realize it was "TBC" and that was a bit annoying.
Funny but animation
Funny but animation isn't impressive enough...