I know it takes alot of work to make claymations however this really needs work.
Here are some main things: The sound recording was bad, you couldn't hear anything all to well. And even the things you could hear were done with bad voice acting. One kid was sniffling the whole time, people stuttered, paused, and interrupted eachother. The combination of the bad sound and voice acting made it pretty hard to listen to. As to the visual aspects of the film, it looks as if you need a new camera. The lighting could also be better. I can tell there was some sort of plot to this, but it is hard to make out with all the things that went wrong. Bottom line is it needs work. After watching some of the other episodes I would say that for the rest of the series as well.
I could tell you tried. And maybe you were just doing it for fun. But honestly unless alot of improvement goes into it it is not worth viewing.