annoying and confusing...
Very good I thought
First of all, I love that song. Second, I really like your animation style and how you just let the story evolve on its own.
It's nice to go back and watch after almost a year haha
It's really good
I absolutely like this animation, it's just too good.
A fine flash
I don't know about these others, but I get it. The storyline is plain to see, you just didn't spoon feed it to the audience. I like the way it was told, the scenes are like remembering a dream, linked but surreal. Very dream like. The music and video complement each other well.
I understand this is your first flash video and I admire that, believe me, I've seen worse.... but, I had no idea of what was goin' on. There was no story at all and that's not the problem, because you can make a fun flash outta nothing with no story... buth this one makes you believe there's one.
Try to work out your character's facial expressions, that would make a big difference.
I'm sure you can make better than this ;)
Erm, put on your glasses dude, you gotta read the comments properly.
This isn't my first flash, its my first of 2008. And if you pay more attention to the comments you will realised that I'd mentioned that there isn't any back story at all.
As for the expressions, you are right, i gotta work more on it. XD