Very cute story!

As cute as the story was I really like it! The only reason you don't get a 10 is because the audio needs a lot of work. I'm stressing this the most though, try to get some voice actors in your work! Get a microphone, and do the voices either yourself, or your friends, or dog. This was really enjoyable to watch!

Good job!

Cute

Something children might like. The animations were great and I liked the themes. But it's not for everyone. Also there were a lot of grammatical errors but I understand English isn't your first language.
How adorable.

Mmm..

Needs Voices.. i almost fell asleep in the talking scenes