good

good lol

lol

okay I am Emo but I thought that was funny it shouldn't offend people and if it does then don't watch

I thought it was good.

I thought it was good. I've seen better but I've definitely seen worse. And to Lifes_a_Bitch, it isn't mocking a person, it is mocking the stereotype. Learn the difference.

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welll the animation is good and all emos are fags!!!

Not funny, in the slightest.

To be perfectly hounest with you, I don't find any humour in this. Mocking people for their stereotype is down right retarded.
As for some tips.
Sound would be an asset. Smoother animation would be also. Try increaseing the frame rate by a couple then inserting more frames. Other than that, that's not much to say. Just stop mocking people.