Lucky(Unlucky) is a series created by me, where something bad happens to someone, but luck saves them, then they just get totally killed by something else randomly.
This movie focuses on suicide.
Please give me tips on how to improve by giving a review, constructive critism only.
**UPDATE**
Edited movie to users requests....Enjoy!
50-50
I loved the first half because it was sad and minimal, the design and the music were a perfect match. Then you.. tried to be funny but it comes out of the blue, and the adding of other elements just showed an unsteady hand. And you should try to invent a logical(or not) reason for those two things to be there.. otherwise it seems forced.
LOL
You sick fuck, but that was pretty funny though. Were you abused as a child by clows? Either way. nice job.
Strange
Bit strange in a way of a storyline. Just improve on effects of what happens. eg. trampoline, and make it longer. Love to see something such as great as other great stickmen pieces of works. See how you're getting used to flash anyway now :)
haha pretty good
this'd be a really gd series, just get some better sound effects and colour stuff in. Ooooooooooo and add blood, adding bloody practically makes you front page, not really but i guess it helps :D
hmmm
it was quite weird, but where did the knife come from, and why the is there a trampoline and the bottom when it seems like it should be the sea with the waves crashing in the background
