Not bad.
Plenty of voice actors on NG just ask! You have the start of some damn good skills. Don't stop. Keep going and you can reach the stars ;)
Author Comments
well, this i my second flash guys, to be honest this one was created only for some friends but i invested a good amount of time with it so i decided to share it with all of you. I´m sorry for the lack of voices, but here in mexico is kind of difficult to find guys that are willing to make voices and even more in english. I tried my best to translate the text I´m sorry if i made some grammar mistakes, i really hope you like it.
Excellent!
Well done Aris! Not a simple animation but a full-fledged cartoon to boot!
Good animation and story, keep the good work!
This was great!
This was actually like a cartoon, not just a Flash! The story was pretty funny (I've got to remember this when I need food, lol). I liked how you gave a history of it at the end too. The mistakes weren't that bad, considering English isn't your first language, and they didn't really affect the cartoon. The graphics and animation were very nice, and the abundance of sound effects were great. I can't wait for more Dog!
hunter1410 responds:
thanks dude, i´m glad you like it and i´m more happy to know that you didn´t have a lot of problems reading my text :D, anof course i´m planning to make more chapters .
thanks!!!
This was like a real cartoon.
This was great. I felt like I was watching cartoon network or something. The only problem I had with it was the grammar. The way things were written, the dialogue didn't always make sense. I and I realize you were going for a certain style for the bearded guy, but when it get's to the point where the viewer is not sure of what is going on because they can't read what is happening, it gets to be a problem.
hunter1410 responds:
yes dude i know, and once again i´m really, really sorry for the grammar mistakes with the text. I really tried very hard to make it as good as possible but sadly it looks like i left some mistakes in the text, i promise that next time i´ll do my best to find somebody that could help me to translate the text as best as possible.
see ya!!!!
5'D and 10'D
It was funny, it had great animation, and it kept me interested throughout about all of the show. Only time you started losing me was the intro, it started to drag on a bit...
Either way, great stuff, I hope to see more! (If there will be more that is)
hunter1410 responds:
thanks dude, and yes i´m thinking to make more chapters, so if the people likes it guess that´s what i should do.
thanks!!!!!