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Animation Collection

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This is the progression of my animation projects through the first semester of my class.

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Not too shabby

For a first semester this is pretty good. You got the bounce on that first ball really well and I like the cattail thingy.

It seems you're still getting to grips with weight, though. Difficult stuff, I'm trying to get my head around it at the moment too. The bit where the guy is hopping from one rock to the next highlights this because his footsteps - considering he's quite a fat bloater - seem a little too light. He also doesn't quite sway and swerve enough when he's trying to regain his balance for it to be quite convincing enough. It's really, really close, but just misses the mark.

You're really good at keeping volumes constant, though. That's very impressive. The things you draw look very solid.

Thanks for uploading (:

Nigel-of-the-Drakes responds:

Thanks, yeah weight is not the easiest. These are things gone over in my critiques, but I didn't have time to fix them. Hopefully next semester I'll get a bit better. Good luck to you in your endeavors.

jeeze

how long did this bad boy take? you're taking an animation class? that's awesome yea keep it up!!

Meh...

Fairly well done although it was a bit boring and very short. I suppose it wasn't meant to be funny or meaningful though so it was passable in my opinion. 3/5, I guess...

All right!

Nice and innocent.

Yes, I liked it

It was really good... with good animation and good effects and audio like the black and white screen, nice work :D!!!

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Apr 29, 2008
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