Your first? Are you sure? Because if it is... You are GREAT! Graphics are extremely detailed, and it feels almost as it is alive! I can't wait to see the final outcome. There's one thing you gotta work on though: In certain parts, it feels extremely laggy. Be a little more careful when you work on the position of the elements in the frames.
Wow this was great se you in top portal!
it seems overly dramatic... but the animation was great
Very nice animation.
I enjoyed this movie you made. The animations and drawings were very well done. The music you used also fit very well. The story seems quite interesting also. The setting is unique, though I feel what is to come is predictable.
Here is what you should change. First you NEED a preloader. Second, I feel that the drawing of the car should be changed or redone if possible. Doesn't really blend in well.
Good job, I expect more quality work from you.
u first flash movie?
ah...you must be a artist!It seems ur movie has a good story.keep working on that.cant waiting for it