Oh My God!!!
The best first submission of all the best first submissions ever!!! It was great the graphics and the music... but the story was kinda sad... poor woman :(
For a "newbie" I thought this was pretty damn good. I'm interested to see this story. The animation and the music look great. The only thing I'd change is to add a play function instead of loop. But thas just my opinion. Other than that, it made me excited to see what happens next. So keep up the good work, get some good voice actors on board to match the animation and music quality. Can't wait to see more.
The detail in the art gives it an outstandingly realistic touch. The style is very non-cartooney and I love it. I can't wait to see the series but since this one took an unspecified forever it seems I'll have to.
I can't belive this is your first flash animation!
Dude it's great!
I love the graphic and the music, really!
I'm already lookin forward for the complete version :P
artwork is good
The story seems very promising, I loved the way you did the raining scene at the start and the flashback was also done well - showing just enough to give you hints without telling you too much.
I look forward to seeing more