Oh God, i think i'm gonna cum oh yes oh yes oh yes oh yes!

what were you thinking

are you on freaking drugs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what the....

firstly im not gonna take that ofensivly.....
but what in the name of newgrounds was that crap?

Hmm...

Would it have hurt to use your own voiceovers? Those types of electronic voices always get English wrong by literally saying what you spell. This flash really has no concept. Two ugly fishes getting high, and then having sex (sorta not needed....) I have to admit that I chuckled at the end due to its randomness, but the flash overall was too quiet and somewhat boring. Enough high jokes have been spread around this nation that if it were weed I would have died long ago... In case this is your first or so flash, keep working on your artwork and take your time. Also be more creative, it was completely generic.

LoZM

mmm. Could've been a lot better.

Okay, just watched this through a couple of times.

Given, the humour is purile. Nothing wrong with that. It's kind of what this place thrives on. But the jokes didn't really come across thanks to a few things, like the timing, which was fairly even-paced and therefore a bit on the dull side. There's no real plot either. Also, the default computer synth voices were kind of irritating and instantly put me off, too. The thing also ended really, really suddenly and felt seriously unfinished.

I've had a quick look around the rest of your submissions and there's some potential in the stuff you've submitted. 6 random pieces of shit kind of raised a smile, and crab murder's kinda fun. I also see you're only 14, and considering that you've got loads of scope. So keep it up. Hope to see something better than this again soon.