this story reminds me of...

Mega man with d-soul
and legend of Zelda with the carnival it makes me think you didn't think of this by yourself
graphics aren't good either

nice flash and story but some stuff needs work

The story is very nice and all but the slow animation (I had it playing in low quality and it was still laggy) and the grammar mistakes make the flash hardly understandable. To improve your animating quality you just need practice, it happens to us all human beings, but you're gonna need a translator to give cohesion to the animation. The good things are that you have a nice plot and good ideas in your head. The shadows you draw on the sprites are kinda freaky, so stop drawing them, besides, the sprites you use are already shaded .

Not so good of a flash, but with some work you could polishit.

Its good

yeah its good..but the transition is pretty slow....too slow atleast thats what i think.

but overall its cool

Just a few bits of Eddie. Sorite!

Me loves the, Porgy.

very good

that was awesome!!!!!