Funny
Just plain randomly funny.
Author Comments
I just got flash back and decided to do something quick i hope you like it
Below average/ Failing
Opening statements:
I looked back on one of your earlier submissions and compared it to this one. You show improvement in every field but storytelling, which decreased but given that this isn't anything serious that can be cast aside.
Animation:
~So much better, it isn't great it but is improved.
~You have no background.
~The mouth animations look strange.
Audio:
~I can barely make out anything, but the last thing I saw from you had no vocals, so that is an improvement.
Miscellaneous:
~I didn't find this very entertaining.
Dead2Animations responds:
I like your review, comparing to my earlier work and such, its nice to see everything summed up as well.
though this was just a short thing I did in a day, not much work on it, you should have a look at my later workings I have here on newgrounds
lolwut
Next time, work more on the animation, coloring, voices, and overall plot
Dead2Animations responds:
Yeah i suppose i should :P
eh...
it was barely ok. next time add a backround and better graphics and a interesting plot would be nice too.
Dead2Animations responds:
I guess i might be able to think of somthing -_^
Loop bad voice acting poorly drawn bad animation
Loop bad voice acting poorly drawn bad animation and bad colouring.
sorry but this was just BAAAaad!
Dead2Animations responds:
Awwwww ok sorry :(
Credits & Info
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2.13 / 5.00
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- Apr 25, 2008
- 11:38 AM EDT