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Mushroom Kingdom Ep4

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Apr 23, 2008 | 8:01 PM EDT

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Nickclick2Nickclick2

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I'll tell it true.

It was okay, hopefully this will help you.

GOOD:
*Cool Story
*Cool Characters
*Good effects

BAD:
*You use movie clips to much. Vary it more.
*Use more sprite backgrounds.
*Improve your grammar.
*Work on fights a little longer.

If you do that, you should be good.


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alexanderthegreat123alexanderthegreat123

Rated 5 / 5 stars

sweet

why do u make so many errors



FechdogFechdog

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Pretty good

This is a pretty good storyline. I feel the animation wasn't as good as you could be. A little more effort could fix the minor things like sound on more of the places that don't have sound and the green lines I see on the edge of the animation sometimes.



DarkLink2000DarkLink2000

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Ummm

Did you edit your script before you made this flash.

Your grammar is terrible. I'm sorry. I bet the idea is cool, but I can't even get it to make sense right now.


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Augustus14Augustus14

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

...

that was really stupid and pointless. cut the little green squiggles at the side n learn to talk english and it will be better. to be continue? how stupid are you?
decent idea for a story tho... i guess...