the animation was not so good,,,, just 'OK' !!!
the audio was nice,,,
but ,,, the story takes a long time to understand,,,
can be done much better...
friend, the animation was bad
author friend, I think his idea was very good (although I have not seen much by not speak English fluently) but the animation guy, do not agree I was good friends with the "Ser5ver" and "Shinkai"for all or almost everything was bad!
but one has to put, keep practicing what you gonna get it
Not good, to put it lightly.
I'm curious how this uneventful flash with definitely some of the worst graphics in any serious flash on newgrounds has over a 2.00. The sex jokes are SO over done (she had the finest pair of dick-sucking lips...i mean come on...not to mention the thought bubbles with the sex), the voice acting is monotonous, low-quality, and just plain forced. In other words, i'm very aware i'm watching a flash. I see a noir parody here. Except, it isn't good. The idea behind a "film noir" does entail sexual parody, but as motivation, not because you looked at her lips and thought "WOW SHE CAN SUCK MY DICK ANY DAY, I BETTER DO THIS CASE SO SHE CAN SUCK MY DICK! I'M THINKING ABOUT HER ON MY DICK RIGHT NOW!" With this playing in the background as i wrote this review, i think the point of the film was something about a sex tape, and that the detective almost took a 'dildo in the ass'?
Looking at the collab members, you probably should have had less animators (since they were all terrible anyways) and more writers. Or, just, not upload this at all.
I'd also like to point out that i stumbled across this flash when i was watching a clock day noir parody where i saw you left a review saying they copied you. This has nothing to do with the flash, but i think it's funny that you think you're the first ones to think of a noir film.
i loved the story but i hated the animation.
keep doing good stuff, but use better animation programs next time.
itd be good with actual sound effects but yeah sinister should be the main artist that way it would be decent