Good
They all summed it up bellow.
Replay buttons are not hard.
Just ask in the forums they will tell you easily.
Author Comments
This movie is about two sticks that are fighting each other to the death in 4 rounds, using different techniques every round.
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by the way tis is my first flash submission
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watch it, enjoy it
~AltairTheAssassin
AltairTheAssassin responds:
it was used as a joke.
Good
For your first one its pretty good. Nice sounds on Round 3. All the fights were short but you'll get better.
Over all 9/10 good work
AltairTheAssassin responds:
Yay i love positive feedback xD!
It was good as first submittion.
I wouldn't accept this from someone who made many flashes but for a first flash it's quite good.
Good: Nice use of sounds, ok animation and more then 10 seconds long :P
Bad:ok animation, to long "Round 1" and so, no music and short
AltairTheAssassin responds:
thanx for the feedback and i'm working on a better movie now
It was ok
Yeah it was........ ok but i think maybe you should speed up the round 1,2 etc scenes :D Got a bit sloooooow. And maybe some backgrounds.
AltairTheAssassin responds:
i know but when i noticed it i was too lazy to change it xD
lol, nipplestone xD
Not Bad
Its not bad considering its your first submission of flash. You should try and move to animated humans with backgroumds and stuff. Otherwise its ok.
AltairTheAssassin responds:
i know just as i told "SorryItsAShortFlash" im trying to move on
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