It's cool. kinda.
I think that this is a little boring. I have an opinion. And this is mine 5/10
Author Comments
This is my first flash so be kind. The flash is a spoof of the ipod ads, the music was made with preset sounds in garageband because i don't own a mac i cant change the music. the music is the copyright of garageband.
lol?
that was alright funny message at the end, try to make your animations a little les squary but hey, gotta give ya effort points on it seamin i havent finished mine and well yea you now..................well thats all i can think of right now ><
Killa117 responds:
lol luke i like to see you to do better. see ya bud
Decent Attempt
You have made a decent effort for your flash. I recommend that you try and tighten up some of the programming to make it flow better as I thought that it was a little stilted in some parts. Improve it and I'll raise my rating.
Keep up the good work
Domdom2323
Killa117 responds:
Thanx i've been improving my animation for a while. so the next animations will be better, thanx so much for the support - Killa117
Lost a star because
he can't dance. Amazing though for a first shot. Keep on Keepin on man.
Killa117 responds:
Thanx for the support - Killa117
I kinda sucked...
But sins it was your first try ill give you props next time try to make a plot line or make it funny or some thing :)
Killa117 responds:
I will make more changes in my later flashes thanx for the tips - Killa117
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