make it a higher frame rate and dont have people in the background
Not a bad try
I think that some people have been overly critical, it was a nice idea but could use improvement. For example you could have less going on in the background try to focus more on the setting, maybe put the set somewhere emptier instead of your bedroom. I would agree that to improve the quality of the animation you would need to use more photos, it takes longer but it looks a lot better =) Nonetheless a good try =)
not enough frames per second
Lets see now.
Bad animation, not flash, short, no sounds, repetive music, small screen and you can see humans in the background.
Im sorry but this really sucks
You should add more frames, have sounds and better music a bigger screen and make sure you can't see people in the background
Don't be so lazy about your animations, use more frames, your animation looks more like a slide show if you don't at least use 12 frames a second, or it is just that you don't have enough inbetweens, take more pictures. Once you clean up the stop motion animation I'll be much more able to make a comment since I'll be able to know what is going on in it.