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A Story on the Open Sea

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Please enjoy this sea tale.

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its... ok

well its not useless or bad but it could be a bit better.


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NewtonClock responds:

Thanks


OH EM GEE

Just like being in the open sea, amazing realism.


NewtonClock responds:

Thanks. It's my specialty.


not to great...

try to make it longer and add a plot... or more action... or more humor.


NewtonClock responds:

Thanks for the advice.

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Views
3,159
Votes
231
Score
2.15 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 19, 2008
2:59 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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