Nice but...

I know it was a prologue but it was a little short. Nice idea, liked the pixelly graphics a lot.
7/10
4/5

umm... dude.....

listen, go to NG beta and submit sample, not here. also, you can get a preloader off of ng- go to downloads at the top of the page.

That Wasn't A Preloader / My Advice

Faking preloaders doesn't make it look professional. I KNOW that wasn't a preloader dude. Even if the movie is 5 seconds long but you want a preloader for effect at least use a real one. There are some tutorials on newgrounds on how o make one or you could just use the real Newgrounds preloader. Anyways that wasn't a very good movie. I'm sorry. It was only the Prologue tho so I'll not rate it a 0 but if you don't make a good or even make period a non prelogue one I'll be dissapointed. As bad as when people make games like Super Stickman Ultimate Crazy Fighter 2 when there is no 1. (That name is not real if you made a game called that I'm not basing it on yours.) And some advice:

1. Don't Put music in at the last second it will be unable to be heard in the first go and noone watches a looping movie twice.

2. Don't post 5 second Prologues (It's alright this time dud you obvs didn't know. I don't mind but some people you can see aren't appreciative of it)

3. Don't make Fake Preloaders

4. Actually make the Real Movie Kay?

5. Listen to my advice and you might get a better score next time!

Ok, a single tip to you.

What a load of bullshit! It doesn't make any sense.

Oh, and to call it a prologue, I guess you would have had to at least tell the story; we don't know what is going on, what we do know is that we have a pressing urge of voting 0.

I don't know how it passed, maybe I don't want to.

fake preloader?

the animation wasn't really anything. All it was was a few words and sprites moving. It had no sound, and had no real preloader. I could tell because it always took the same amount of time to load even when it looped. You need a lot of work, try to get a little better before submitting again