knew it!
all from tf2!!!
These are some 3D models(made in 3DS Max) that I animated in flash. I made the minigun in 3D and animated it in flash. My brother made the turret and I animated them in flash. The minigun and right turret each have 4 different frames. The left turret has 24 different frames. I just want some feedback about how the animations look, so that I can improve them(or not use them) for future flash submissions. I am trying this mainly because I can't draw to save my life.
Warning: This is VERY SHORT.
knew it!
all from tf2!!!
its not even a game
needs to be a game...not just a moving picture
Hmm, pretty good
The artwork is pretty nice, and the animation is pretty smooth, but the 24 frame one jerks a little when it eh... is facing my left. I think. Whatever, it's still a little jerky. As I said, the art is pretty nice, but this wouldn't be too helpful for a "real" animation. If your going to use these to animate, I would suggest animation say:
Minigun
MinigunFiring
MinigunStopping
MinigunRecoil
MinigunBullet
After which, you can combine them (those were suggestions. I don't draw guns in detail, or I haven't yet, so those were off the top of my head) to create things in your animation if necessary. Also, in future, I'd suggest not submitting tests? Thanks, and once again, decent work.
Smooth and Well made
Those are very nice models, I don't spot any flaws within the animation nor within the models themselves. However You didn't show much to this. It doesn't keep your audience interested. I do have a suggestion though for 'displaying' these if you're going to continue. It would probably even look nicer to your audience if you took all of your short animation displays and put them into one flash, like a porfolio with a neat set up and cover design.
Hmmm
A bit lack lustre, surprised it even got threw the portal.
The animation was good, actually it looked excellent, you've got some talent there. Bit worried about the file size though need to work on your compression a bit.
Well there was nothing else really, what you had there was good, just a waste of a submission, would like to see what your movie will look like that you're using them in though, I look forward to it
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