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This is just a simple Rube Goldberg device I drew for a school project, then animated it 'cause I was bored. There's hardy anything to it, really, just a (badly drawn) machine that feeds a dog his breakfast.
Don't feel bad blamming it, it was just for fun.


EDIT:
I emailed him the animation, and it turns out my science teacher was so impressed with it (dunno why) that he showed it to a conference in Atlanta. ><. I feel like showing him Decline or something and watch him go through the roof.


At first I thought this was pretty bad, till I saw what my classmate did. Totally unoriginal, pretty much copied my design, and then did it in Flash, except it was awful! I know I'm not really in a position to criticize, this hardly passing judgment and all, but you'd agree with me if you saw this.

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This isn't such a bad flash, actually.

Quite genious ideas on your machine. Make your machine bigger, and it's sure to be a hit! And by the way, do you draw plans on paper before actually making the machine? Because if you didn't, I strongly suggest you do. It helped me a lot when I created my Rube Goldberg machine.

Goldtop responds:

Thanks! Always great to get constructive feedback nobody else has written. I did, in fact, draw this out on paper. The next step I took was to draw the device on Flash, which was all I had planned on doing, so of course it was a pain to change everything around to make it animatable.

Interesting idea...

could be alot better if you fleshed it out with some sound and better animation/graphics...

intresting

i like the concept of it,but i think it could have been just a wee bit faster though and some sound effects would have helpped too. but i do like it so,g ood job.

Very good

I liked it. It wasn't badly animated, but could be better. The reaction times take a little long tho. Other than that, it is good.

sooound

add sound, speed it up, and.. Maybe make a title page.

plus, thats a game...

Goldtop responds:

As for your suggestions, (pretty much the same as the others, so this is their response as well) thanks, I might do a second one with these considerations in mind.
As to it being a game.... um, no it isn't?

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2.44 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 15, 2008
7:26 PM EDT
Genre
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