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good idea but it needs a better story line but good idea
Not bad... It's a good start. Just, try not to do something dumb. Actually take time to make the plots now. THough you gotz the right idea. Keep it up.
Keep it REaL,
it wasnt good, but it wasnt bad, the animation was ok could have been smoother, as you said the sound wasnt that good and rob doesnt actually say anything (unless the muttering with the bird counts) the concept is good and with some work it could turn out quite well
It was entertaining, the art is good. You are off to a good start. However, you need to work on your plot. Why would someone risk their life to get a bird off a ledge...when it's a bird sitting on a ledge that can fly. That didn't really make any sense. Also, it is very important read what you write, because spelling expand as "epand" at the end kind of destroys your credibility. I think with a little work you could really have something, though.
That is true, I only noticed that now..my mistake...
I am trying to go with plots that are in a way unreal, or not true to life, I think it adds a bit of humour...But I might be wrong, which is why I put it up here to get some feedback...
thanks for the response =)