not bad

this looks like it is going to be an interesting series. i wish you luck and great job!

Wow nice job

I like the animation the music and what I like about it the most was its story line.

potential

There was ALOT of motion tweening, and it didn't look right with the hand drawn characters. try and add more fbf animation. Also voice actiors kind of sucked... were way to serious. The Camera jumped around alot and teh story flew by in 30 seconds. It was also a bit short. Take more time on releasing the sequel. Polish it up, add alot to it and make it way better then the first one. When you think your finished with it watch it again and revise all the parts and make it even better. Alot of potential.

Unlimited Potential

First thing I noticed, similar to XIN, by lifepoint1.com, also a hint of DBZ in there. Although I do see potential. Voice acting wasnt too bad. Need more SFX, story progressed from screen to screen to quick. Slow down! Whats your hurry? This is anime you could draw out anything, even him drinking the water haha.

As for the drawing, not bad, shading though, do some work on shading and that will make the anime that more lively. I personally would do some badass style eyes on them all, but thats me. To me anime is all hair and eyes. Overall I gave it a 7 because I want to see more of them. Hopefully you act on the advice the people on NG are giving, and ignore the naysayers.

Have fun.

hmmm nb

not bad as a video although it was a little too much short to be an episode. make the episodes a bit longer. now as drawing, it was not so great, but i now that its difficult to make a video until you get used to the settings so i say its worth a 6 as a beginning. As they said before, you should have added more sound effects but it still was good. liked the ending song too.