Very nice
This is a very promising looking demo and I look forward to the final product. Not much to really say as it's obviously going to be cleaned up a fiar bit in the final product as I would imagine.
Author Comments
This is a demo of a series I am making called Friends of Helimon. This basically introduces the three characters Alec, Nemo, and Rem. Helimon is a country in the midst of a giant war against the neighboring country Jeminal. These three protagonists are swept into this war through a series of events and .................... anyway. I know i need sound but I don't have a speaker or any sort of knowledge of how to get basic sound effects like wind or swish noises. advice would be much appreciated. Make sure to tell me who your favorite is.
edit: I have decided to make this a side story in a much larger story. Not sure I'm animating it but I definitly am writing the story. If anyone wants it I will pm them.
pretty good man
your pretty good at animation since it is only a demo the only reason I really gave this a 8 was because it would have been allot cooler with sound but that my opinion but overall kick ass love to see this become a flash series cause it looks like it would rock
ok so...
great potential. thats for damn sure. but the lack of clarity and sound is going to be an issue. i understand this is a demo, so maybe your planning to clean it up a bit. lets hope so. I could see this becoming huge as long as you cleaned it up and had sound. so keep it up, falz.
good attempt
not a bad try, but this is with all honesty, i couldnt see much with all the lines moving so rapidly, especially at close-ups of faces that i could barely make-out. although doing the actions themselves and the method you used to present the characters were not bad.
try out some other methods of animating for a more effective way of producing images without all the wiggly lines XD
7-1 average
i like Alec
www.findsounds.com is a good place.