not bad

it was good. I hope you get better with your animations =3

Improvement is possible

Doing something like this is a great jumping off point for growing your own story. Develop it into something and make it a goal to improve animation and illustration with each episode. Also remember that the last frame is the last thing people will remember, so perhaps clean up the 'to be continued' graphic.

Best of luck.

I recognise this...

I've seen this all before... is this based on Archlord, the manga and game franchise? The characters, the talking sword and the story sequence are all the same! Anyway, I liked it! I suppose you are going to spin off and create and alternate storyline. The audio was lacking but still, good job, I'll be on the lookout for your next big hit! Keep ut up!

ehh

u could of done alot better then that seriously needs better audio and more work on the anuimation

not bad...

clean up the animation in the next one. Just set a goal to improve one or more animation/sound aspecs of the movie, and then the more movies you make, the better you become.

as for story, I would make the dude like a thief type "profession", who was sent on a simmilar or the same quest, but got captured by whatever dwells in the dungeon.

~Qwerty