Nice!
I could almost see it being a big series here at NG
Author Comments
The adventures and mis-adventures of Makuri-chan, Pyoi-chan and Bunny-kun in the town of yokohama.
Enjoy this movie and i hope you want more, because theres plenty on the way <(^.^)>
anime ftw.
Yoruichi responds:
I hope so ^^ thanks for your support
i like it
well it looks really simple but i can tell you atleast have a creative mind and can make a good flash :D keep it up
Yoruichi responds:
thanks, i am still newish to flash and i hope you will look forward to my improved works ^^
Aaaww shit, he busted out the 'chans' and 'kuns'
Not bad, it doesn't look horrible, though it could use major work, such as voice acting and more stylized character drawings. They for some reason look like Madness characters with anime features to me for some reason.
It looks like you have an idea of what you're doing with the way things were organized, but I would say ease up on the whole Japanese culture thing...Unless you're Japanese, because I've had Japanese friends who I hadn't heard say 'chan', 'san' or 'kun' in the whole time I knew them as much as you have in this flash and author comments. It seems...Incredibly unrealistic for some reason. Maybe do something involving your own culture so it doesn't seem so forced out? Not trying to dicourage you by any stretch of the imagination, just needs major improvements. Good luck with the project, you're getting there!
Yoruichi responds:
cheers for the advise, I was going more towards anime culture than japanese....although some say there aint a difference, you pointed it out with my over-use of chans ^^ I'm also planning japanese voice-overs with the speech *bubbles* acting as subs so the chans will be acceptable. great review and thanks for your criticism, it will help a lot in my coming publishings.
