Good artwork
Well, the artwork was good, I'll give you that.
Author Comments
Ok i am new with flash i know but i wanted to make a video to try and intimidate my opponents in the Confrontation campaign we play...And what would be a better idea than sending them a link to newgrounds with a cool video...Maybe i didn't manage to make it a cool video but i still like it....
By the way since many will not understand what Confrontation is, it is a tabletop wargame like Warhammer....Thanx!
hmm
It's a good concept but you could improve your writing and the story didnt really intrest me. If you plan on making another one i suggest some more movement and eventually effects. I would like to know where you got the background pictures though because i have a strong feeling i had one of them as a poster a few years ago.
It needs more movement if a sequel arrives.
If this does tell a story in the same approach in black but animate it until it can be done no more. I would love to see more of this arrive in the future but for this I give it 6. I hope this criticism will help you with your work!!
AcheronWolven responds:
Ok then maybe there is going to be a sequel with actual plot and events.
I took for granted many things while making this video and it was to be seen by like 5 people but now i see it as a challenge and i will try to make a video like the ones i enjoy in this site...hm let's see...
Thanx for the review
meh
I was expecting more action or at least some action.. your art is good though keep it up
Well...
When I saw this in the portal, I instantly thought of 'Paint it Black.' Awesome song. Now get a better, more fitting topic.
AcheronWolven responds:
At least i chose a nice piece of music right? Not fitting topic?Not sure i get what you mean, obviously my first creation couldn't actually "worth" such a song but i put it in there anyway
Thanx for bothering, maybe the sequel will be better
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2.75 / 5.00
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