very solid was the animation and the designs, but good job!!!
Author Comments
This is a movie I put together in about 10-15 hours. I just started with my new animation program three months ago, so don't expect much.
This movie includes:
100% original content
Lots of tweens and Frame-by-frame
480x360 resolution
23 Layers
1,180 Frames
No sound =(
No play button (sorry)
Hope you like it!
Solid concept nice job
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Great concept. Add some better sound and animation and we have ourselves a great flash here.
A nice idea
and a funny way to turn the hunter (fisher) into the prey.
I think it's worth of a 5/10 because:
Art: 4/10, it's very simple, the water is a still light blue area, there is no backgrounds, add details.
Animation: 7/10, not a bad job, but there are some glitches (ex: when the fisher gets caught his leg it's ripped apart for a second and then sticks back).
Story: 9/10 a very short tale but a good idea developing.
Music-sound: 0/10, no music (a relaxing one could fit), no sound, this could give a serious boost to your flash.
So you got the hardest thing to find in a flash: good ideas; add some music and work on your graphics and animation skills to give more impact to your work.
Woolybear777 responds:
See people, this is how your criticism should be. *couph couph* ESKIMOJO. Thanks for the usefull pointers. I didn't even think of a backround lol/
Edit: The leg problem was caused by a tween. (obviously) I don't know how i missed it when I proof viewed. Oh well. I just fixed it.
An excellent start
I love it. You have great taste.
I gave 3/5 but I would definitely make it a 5/5 if you made it a little longer with sound.
That would be awesome. Sounds like hard work but it would be great.
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