take it up a notch
you got soemthing there but i felt like all the jokes were unfullfilling, maybe you could of done more with them. i like the animation though, nice job
Author Comments
Here is my very first flash animation, It's kind crap but i think its good for a beginner.
The voices are lame and the lip syncing is a bit off but hopefully you can get a laugh out of it (:
- Well Enjoy
P.S. my next animations should be better (:
don't forget to vote
hehe
Nice
it was funny, a was cracking up for a sec when i saw the gay bar thing, but its still keep it up man.
i didnt know that
you had to wait in line to get to heaven
Ok...
Good movie and cool text effects.
Try to make it more funny.
a good start
you show some potential, certainly
the only thing I have to complain about is that dislexic and stupid are not the same thing