Just plain dumb.
It was very weird when I was watching it. I did not know what was happening in most of the parts ( the lava pit I don't know why suddenly it was there) and the graphics remind me of something crappy that I watched before so it brings back the memories. It kind of just wasted my time because there wasn't much point in it.
If you watch other peoples' toons, some are weird but they have another meaning, is funny, good graphics. It does have a plus side, you did not use the dreaded Times New roman font, I like smileys, and I know it is very hard making good graphics and stuff so if you are just starting (like me :) ) I would definately give it a higher score than those people ( n00bs) who just put together some sticks or skateboards and reuse the sounds ( sound of a hand gun being used for an explosion etc...) and stuff and after like 3 minutes, they submit it and they get really mad with the reviews. I hope you become a better author and make better flashes so i'll just give it a seven now because after all, I've seen better smiley-based flash.
The movie was very short, and some of the animations were too fast to see what was going on. Really was no plot and wasn't very funny. Keep working!
Sorry... you have to improve a lot
But it was kinda funny