...Not that bad
Author Comments
Two men, each the polar opposite of the other, have an emotional connection in the most unexpected way at the bus stop.
MRat responds:
...thank you
Very enjoyable.
Very nice short, Keeps you interested, and isn't dragged out at all. Very impressive.
Keep up the good work!
MRat responds:
Thanks hah
Now this on the other hand.
I rather enjoyed this one, except for when it ended so abruptly, it could've gone on just a little longer.
MRat responds:
It really couldn't have. The abrupt ending is pretty important to the plot. Unless you wanted to watch them stand there doing nothing for a bit, which I think might have actually been better.
Anyway thanks, this was a pretty experimental little work. I think it went over most people's heads, haha.
I like the concept!
Nice work man! I think it could have been cleaner visually, but other than that, great stuff.
MRat responds:
Thanks, and yeah it definitely could have been cleaner. Honestly, there are a load of things left to work out before I'd say it was "good" but it was a fun excerise.
I liked it alot
you got a nice handle on facial expression.. its a bit.."morphy" the way the frames sorta blend into each other but I think you will polish that off with time.
fun stuff man keep up the good work.
MRat responds:
Thanks. I suppose if I spent more than 2 days on it, and did any planning at all, it wouldn't be morphy, but I'm a fag and I rushed it.
It's cool you like it though, haha.