It was great but...
It seemed like you abruptly cut it off at the end...
Episode 2 of Super Koopa World
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Our hero considers performance enhancers to aid him in defeating mario. Stay tuned for the next episode, it's only going to get crazier from here.
(((::Author Notes::)))
Last time people complained about the speed and visibility of the text, as well as lack of sound FX.
I've corrected both in this episode.
All of the episodes will follow this same idea of a short section of the story. If you enjoy them and want to see where it all goes check back every so often to see the next installment (no normal schedule i finish them by)
**Reviews are Requested and will be responded to, let me know what you think!
It was great but...
It seemed like you abruptly cut it off at the end...
Super Koopa World Ep.2: 5/10
Oh no, not another sprite movie... it would have been much more interesting if you put in the extra effort to draw everything yourself and add voices instead of using the same old sprites that everyone else uses. It gets so tiring to see the same exact sprites over and over and over... the story was good, I didn't expect something about human growth hormones to pop up in a Mario sprite movie, but right where it was about to get interesting, it ends. If you aren't good at drawing, do it anyway because the more you practice the better you will become. Also, if you do not have a microphone for voice acting, just go to the store and buy a cheap one for fifteen dollars, it's worth it.
Wow, definately great improvement over number 1
I love the idea of mario being the villan lol. Needs more sound effects though, and tone down the music.
WOOTZ!^.^
Definatly much better! The only problem here is that your animations don't loop very well.
Everything Was Just OK!!
Yay, you changed the letters, colors, it was easy to read and it was perfect it timing!!
As I said before, I'm really looking forward for the "Mandly Juice" in the next episode.
Keep it up
Thanks for the review :)