umm it was a bit strange, il give you some ups and downs
-it looked like a water dragon or somthing..how did the 4 wheeler drive in water, and if not the dragon had no feet...
-after the switching of heads i think you put just a bit to many lol
hope this helps
This one was better. Though, work harder.
But of course, your so much better then me, because I havent made a flash yet.
After watching this, and playing your rpg battle 9 I have one thing to say to you. you have great potential. Go watch some tutorials, and keep practicing, something i like about the 2 ive seen so far, they are simple, and have EXTREME potential. I know i havent made ant games myself, and the videos i have made are those of wich i never posted on newgrounds, however i critique alot, and try to give constructive criticism. Anyways, watch tuts, write down the most useful stuff you found, and then your on your way! =D i love that your stuff seems to have an rpg feel, ( of course the rpg battle ) but even this movie. You get too mant negative posts, seriously. Anyways, dont give up, and keep practicing.
if this was ur best the it sucked
You should learn GRAMMER AND SPELLING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Better than the ones before that I've seen.