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Primal War 16

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Chapter 16 is where chapter 11 left off with the battle at King Kanos kingdom. Hidding out at a village that is populated with no warriors but scholars , and poets The King thinks he is safe till the same Dinosaurs that destroyed their kingdom has caught up with them.


A few flaws, but otherwise very good.

Sorry I'm not a big fan of these, but they've improved over the episodes.
I was especially impressed with the last minute or so of animation.
Work on walking loops, I noticed a little "stuttering" (I've had that problem more times than I can count)

You have a good style, but I've noticed, that the quality of the character drawing greatly affects it's range of movement. (Better drawn beasts/dinosaurs usually move less)
It's all about adapting a style for animaiton, while keeping true to your drawings.
The women usually fall into the same poses, learn to draw more angles, and this could be fixed.

The backgrounds and environments were more interesting to me than the characters, but that's my view.
Still, not saying you should stop doing what you're doing, but you should challenge yourself. Try new ways of presenting your stories, and push your boundaries (I would like to see more fight scenes, like in the older episodes, because those were very well animated)

Good luck!



I realy like the animation in the whole series. it's almost done like a movie in alot of ways. Well done.

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100th Review! Great Movie!

Like always, nvr a dissapointment!
Great job wif this one, great visual & u have the great patient to do all this, man!

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Great Storytelling!

i like how you create the suspence by giving just a little away at a time. I've just watched all the episodes and i gotta say nice job. It's kinda like a soap opera except this is better.

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i remember when i saw the beginning of this series like a year or so ago

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4.26 / 5.00

Mar 15, 2008
12:46 PM EDT