work on it

you need to work on the animation but yeah you did alright job

good effort, some flaws

Nice effort. There's some room for improvement here... adding some colour would help, some more backgrounds too, and there's a problem with the centering of the words on the screen that you might want to fix, but it does look like you put in some effort and I think the series will be worth watching. Good luck with your next work!

LOLZ UR FONT WUZ 2 BIG 2 READ

I think you did a nice job on the animation, while having no color there was an identifiable style there, I liked it. While promising leading up to the series you say will be better, having to guess what the last words of the sentence was annoying.

Not too bad.

Well, the frame by frame is good and the storyline is even pretty good, plus, the song fits well, but as many other's will tell you, the text isn't completely visible, which makes it a little hard to understand. Also, some more in-depth backgrounds would be nice. Nevertheless, good luck with the full-length version.

um...

I dont know if it was the font you used or something or just my computer but all the text cut off at the right...like I could only see half a sentence. Check to make sure your using static text because I know dynamic text will sometimes cut in half
other than that it was pretty good but try to improve your drawing