funny

very funny XD

in all honesty...

it was k...you have potential ill give you that, you know how to animate and you can draw fairly well, just put some more thought into the animation part hm? the story is half the work and thats half of what gets you the points, go watch "the pen is mightier than the sword" on the front page, see how somthing so simple can be done with such grace and the fact is, its basic but beautiful eh, watch some vids and look for inspiration! good luck :D

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atleast its a little funny....

If this is ever read.......

not quite sure if anyone will even read this review, but I do have to say that I was not much of a trooper in watching this. It was short, and not the good short, the short that I wish was shorter short. You seemed to use shapes with obtrusley thick lining instead of hand drawn medium to thin lining. Also, the sound and premise were weak. Hopefully future flashes we can see your real talent, not just some 3rd grade shape building skills. Hope you improve and will be happy to check out your new one.