Good Beginning
Hey man ... some nice beginnings to flash animation. I like some of your cool effects that u used. But you definitely need to develop your ideas more further as they are in their primitive stages.
Keep making more flash animations.
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Line Life 3 enjoy!
F-Ninja responds:
i will keep making animations and thanks for complementing my effects lol
Nice
To you 'That1andonly': This flash, unlike most on newgrounds, that are just for entertainment, had at least one central message, and bland though it may be, it get's my vote for that alone. Smoking makes you look stupid, and overall it's a hazardous choice that's taken many a family member from me. Don't be that stupid, just because you feel into it from peer pressure and you're trying to make yourself feel better.
To you Joseph: I like the style in this video, and your animation skills are superior to mine, but the length should've been extended, at least for a submitted flash on newgrounds.
Keep animating though, I look forward to you next piece, just spend a little more time on it, and put a little more effort. I'd really like to see what you can do.
F-Ninja responds:
thanks good to see some are more intelligent then others
good, but short
I really liked the style this had, and the music was good. But it was just way too short.
F-Ninja responds:
glad you like the style and my next one will be longer
LAME!!!
Smokeing also makes you look cool, and it makes u soopr smart.
F-Ninja responds:
smoking makes you smell, causes cancer, and it does not make you smarter it makes you dumber, 2 more things 1.your a retard 2. no one likes people who have missing teeth, smell, have bad breath, and are stupid so =P