creeply intersting
im srry for the horrible score im givivng u but it was not very touching at all
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Hey again newground folks!
After two long days of editing the last bits and scraps on the final version of the movie it is finaly done!
In this edit: I made a "secret" button somewhere unlocking to a speciale frame , edited the text speed , inserted blanks between the text aswel to make it easyer to read, redone all spelling errors and finished off some little details...
I must say I am proud on this final version of the movie, hope you do like it aswell...
Also I wanna thank the people who once again gave me alot of tips, hints and tricks to compleet this FINAL version of my first flash.
Kirlim over and out!
niiiice
I Like this flash. Step by step you are becoming a great flash animator and you´ve got so much potential
Very nice.
I think i saw this from the first time you posted it. Its improved much but there are still a couple errors with the text and at the end quotes disappearing. But I like this flash i have liked the idea from the beginning, and now its much improved. well done!
Kirlim responds:
Ill edit it when I have the chance ,
On this moment my internet is screwed becous of my download limit =(
so it takes 3 houres to upload it and I am not gona do that now fore 2 " :p
So...
Have you lost a loved one when you made this?
This was truly touching :)
Its good...
it flows well and the music was nice. To help keep the mellow/sad theme that music presents, look into fading in and out words, it might make your final production nicer. While I did enjoy it, I feel that you got lazy towards the end with just having text, I can see why you may have chose that, but there could have been a complimentary picture or something in the corner. Good Work
Kirlim responds:
I didn't get lazy , I realy used this way to bring the final messages to focus more on the words and the story they tell, instead of drawings. B
ecous this scene explains woth happens after Mark fly's down, he leaves heaven and gets reborn.
It realy doesn't fit the picture to have a woman legs spread on a table pressing out a baby's head...