Twas ok.

It wasn't worth higher than a 3, but it was a good start for a flash. Be sure to improve on this. =)

Not bad, but a long way to go

You've got some obvious drawing talent here, but your lacking the animation skills to do them justice - it was shaky in places and the lack of colour until the very end of it gave the appearence that you were lazy with the animation

Work on your animation skills, as they are affecting what is obviously some very good cartoon art. Take time to colour it in, and possibly find a cartoon themed backing track, along with some more interesting and less tedious sfx to put it together. Also avoid repeating an entire 'scene' as again it looks lazy!

Keep practicing and i can see your work on the front page, you have potential but lack experience and effort in places

WHY?!

The drawings in some places were good and you coloured him in at the end when it finished, why didn't you just colour it all in?. The animation was pretty jerky so there couldn't of been many different frames, it wouldn't take too long to just colour it all in, this is like half finished work.

This was really cute.. ..

I wonder if this was your first animation, if so, then it explains a lot. You did really well overall, and I especially like the inbetween of "Warner Bros" look and "anime" look, though I dont know if that was intentional. I guess what Im saying is that it was well drawn. LOL My critiques....The sound is WAAY off and the reason for this is because...my 2nd critique...not enough animation. While you did a good job of presenting the story(and I really like the ending), but because there isnt enough animation and the sound gets thrown off, it sorta takes you out of the experience. So, if you make another one (and I hope you do) just take this into consideration, and you will have a much better flash!

Defining a good video

That was cute, So was the message :D Great job! *meow*

~ND :3